Asylum pages 55-56 ch3

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page 55
panel1: i'm improving at drawing hands ^_^ and you ought to recognize the symbol on Danny's hands now. it was originally gonna be blood on his hands but... that was unoriginal, unproductive to the plot and i don't want to truamatize Danny like that anymore. so it;s this instead
panel2: yeh. perportions are wierded out here. Capn-nomy, do you begin to see what i meant before?
panel3: Danny's stunned/surprised look of dawning realization is funny to me. 'doom' is supposed to be a sound effect for something...'doomful' looming over you. yeh.
panel4: if these guys remind you of anything else from , say FMA, please don't bring it up. it was entirly unintentional and i really don't want to hear the comparison if you now what i'm talking about, as i was didn't notice the simliarity until after i was done drawing. if you haven't a clue what i'm talking about, please return to the regularly schedualed comic comments XD

page 56
panel1:man, these guys have creepy eyes.
panel2: danny seems kinda cute on this page, even though he's terrified. i think it's becuase his hair came out well.
panel3: those ghoul things are a PAIN IN THE BUTT to draw over and over. glad they never appear again. this is Danny's last nightmare for the flashback.
panel4:favorite panel. LOOK!! THE FORESHORTENING CAME OUT OK!! Yaaaay!! *dies*

alright, that's it for now.

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